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Do you want to make your novel the best it can be?
Editing for romance, fantasy and young adult fiction writers
You’ve put your heart and soul into crafting your story. Now comes the vulnerable bit. It’s time to hand it over to someone who can provide objective feedback. As a professional editor with over 17 years’ experience of helping authors to improve their manuscripts, I can give you the expert guidance you need.

Manuscript critique

Developmental edit

Line-edit

Why work with me?

Invaluable
You’re ready to invest in improving your manuscript and in yourself as a writer. As well as editing your text, I will equip you with the skills and knowledge to hone your writing craft.

Honest and balanced
You value direct feedback, delivered with kindness. I will tell you which areas need work, but also what you’re doing right and how you can build on that.

Personable
Clear communication is important to you. I will listen carefully to your specific needs from the outset and give regular updates as work progresses.




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